It was a normal day. The sun as usual was
in highest of it’s spirits. The melting power of the sun was getting stronger
with each passing second. The heat was tearing the skin apart. The
traffic was unending and the vehicles made sure they didn't miss a second adding
to that humongous noise pollution. There was a chaos in the market and I was
agoged seeing the crowd. The burning heat had NO VISIBLE effect.
Meanwhile all this hustle and bustle , I
saw a lad with the least possible cloth on his 500 gms of body, bare foot,
running from one person to the another , "de do bhaiya, bhuk lagi hai" (Give me some money, I'm Hungry). He
was merely entertained by anyone and even who did, were not able to satisfy
him. There was not even a squintilla of happiness in his expressions. I could
hardly find any curvy line on his tanned shrunken face. His small hands were
not able to accommodate his earning. As a result, two of the coins fell from
his pocket. He couldn’t bend down, there were more coins in his hands that
needed his attention. He stood there, thinking of what to do next.
And just then entered the hero of the
story, little ravenous bearing the "GAP” tag on his t-shirt and wearing a
Nike cap. His Sketcher shoes completed his "Richie Rich" look. He bent down,
took the coins and pushed it in the half-tore pockets.
I could see two completely different worlds
. . . together.
They moved apart. As he was getting in his
cool comfortable black Mercedes, he looked back. The coin boy was still standing
there, drops of sweat travelling down till his navel. The sun still above his
head, trying to suck the left over in his body.
Richie rich got in. the a/c automatically
vaporized the sweat. As the temp dipped down and he felt cold, he let out a
warm smile to the coin boy. The boy, holding the coins tightly , replied back
with a curve. A curve that joined two different worlds, two completely
different worlds.

As a story .... it is brilliant.... bt we all know . The harsh reality of these kids ...all those kidnapping.. forcing them into beggers ...
ReplyDeleteI'm not questioning about the matter it is brilliant... the way u've carved the story line is brilliant ....! Loved it! Every bit of it!
I m too amateur to deal with the subjects u mentioned Sahani , I just wrote what I saw :)
ReplyDeleteI'm not criticizing....
ReplyDeleteThis stuff is brilliant .....
But there is other side of the coin too! Just a suggestion!
It is good .. damn one!
I'm not criticizing....
ReplyDeleteThis stuff is brilliant .....
But there is other side of the coin too! Just a suggestion!
It is good .. damn one!
Feeling happy...:)
ReplyDeleteBcz by mistake ur story is infront f me..bt whn story ends..thn I'm feeling pround on myself..:p. Tht even my mistake show me the "brilliant writer with wonderful word" wala part my friend ..whom I'm not aware till now...:).:)
Raghav , koi nahi yaar , it's better late than never :) glad u liked it , age pichey click Kr le , r bhi hai ;) :p
DeleteReally wonderful
ReplyDeletethe way u write nvr seems to stop astonishing me...
ReplyDeleteN d way u encourage , never seems to stop motivating me
DeleteWhen you write..i lost myself in the story..it took almost 5 min to read this merely 20 lines..every word is its own meaning and it made me visualized the moment what you were looking at the time. I feels like i lived those 15 min here. You are superb writer Shreya. God Bless you. keep the spirit going (y)
ReplyDeleteTHANKYOU mr Photographer :)
ReplyDelete"the vehicles made sure they didn't miss a second adding to that humongous noise pollution" wao.. this is how u steal the precious sense of life which every buddy feel, still.. was kept unexpressed.
ReplyDelete:) <3
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