Short story - 02
Swarm of people rushed into the metro, making it cumbersome for the nose to grasp in oxygen. The air around got mixed with the sweaty smell making the situation intolerable .
Swati again lost in the battle for having a seat . Like all the other days, today also she saw him. An unfamiliar guy who somehow managed to protect her against the enemy group of geeks who constantly took advantage of the rush and tried to rub their bodies against any available female.
He stood tall before her. " I have a warrior " she thought. One of her friend succeeded in grabbing a seat and offered it to her.
She gently replied
" I feel safer here, i ll prefer standing"
While her friend couldnt get her convoluted answer, the warrior looked back. He was smiling. Swati looked down and moved closer.
Swarm of people rushed into the metro, making it cumbersome for the nose to grasp in oxygen. The air around got mixed with the sweaty smell making the situation intolerable .
Swati again lost in the battle for having a seat . Like all the other days, today also she saw him. An unfamiliar guy who somehow managed to protect her against the enemy group of geeks who constantly took advantage of the rush and tried to rub their bodies against any available female.
He stood tall before her. " I have a warrior " she thought. One of her friend succeeded in grabbing a seat and offered it to her.
She gently replied
" I feel safer here, i ll prefer standing"
While her friend couldnt get her convoluted answer, the warrior looked back. He was smiling. Swati looked down and moved closer.
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ReplyDeleteBeautiful as u! 😍😅 They were in the game .... as she said! 😅😇😍😄
ReplyDeleteThe author gives u the liberty of thinking positive ;)
DeleteAs always! 😎
DeleteBeautiful as u! 😍😅 They were in the game .... as she said! 😅😇😍😄
ReplyDeleteAyeee.. thats a sweaty/sweet short story.. agey kya hua??
ReplyDeleteSome stories flow in the imagination, this is one of that kind. You may perhaps think anything u want my warrior :*
DeleteAyeee.. thats a sweaty/sweet short story.. agey kya hua??
ReplyDeleteSo, what happened with the warrior and his lady?
ReplyDeleteI would prefer if they get to live happily ever after; rushing in metros and holding hands for all while the life lasts...
Lovely as usual.
:)
Miss sushan, if an author like u Wants to end the story like this, i m sure that in a world parallel to ours, they must be thanking you for this...
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